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:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found your style of writing endearing, as it is somewhat similar to my own. In this critique, I would like to highlight a few things I liked about your poem and also offer a few tips that may help you with future pieces (hopefully). On the theme, it took me a little delving to get into it proper...


:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found the images in this poem, though simple and possibly even commonplace, intense and refreshing. This is not a bad thing; in fact, it's even cooler that you were able to use ordinary images in an interesting way. You used a single color, gray, which my imagination responded to with a grayscal...

Official deviantART critiques I've done. These are mostly, if not completely, for poetry works; as poetry is one of the few subjects on which I have enough insight to critique.

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abunai59
abunai59
United States
Computer Engineering, Poetry, Music, Love, Life.
コンピュータ工学,詩、音楽、愛、命。
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i've submitted a lot of poetry to deviantArt since joining.
however, most of that work ends up irritating me or being flawed in some way that cannot be unseen.
so for anyone wondering why my gallery is so tiny, it's because i keep it updated with only the best of my work.
(or what i consider the best at any point in time)

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SatoshiII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Long time no see, stranger.
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OHiNeedTea Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thanks for the fav :D
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91816119 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, honey. :heart:
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Republic2033 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
thanks for faving :happybounce: I really appreciate it !
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Akai-karasu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty late, but still: thanks for collecting 'values! :)
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for the :+fav:, and the incredibly helpful critique. :iconarmstrongtighthugplz:
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Vainamoinenian Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your webcam is Mesmerizing! I totally loved it! :D Is there a continuation? Or a place where I can read all their dialogues? 
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Vainamoinenian Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the fave! :)
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SeaPlume Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for the :+fav: on my poems!
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