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About Deviant Official Beta Tester abunai59United States Group :iconda-engineering: dA-Engineering
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:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found your style of writing endearing, as it is somewhat similar to my own. In this critique, I would like to highlight a few things I liked about your poem and also offer a few tips that may help you with future pieces (hopefully). On the theme, it took me a little delving to get into it proper...


:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found the images in this poem, though simple and possibly even commonplace, intense and refreshing. This is not a bad thing; in fact, it's even cooler that you were able to use ordinary images in an interesting way. You used a single color, gray, which my imagination responded to with a grayscal...

Official deviantART critiques I've done. These are mostly, if not completely, for poetry works; as poetry is one of the few subjects on which I have enough insight to critique.

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abunai59
abunai59
United States
Computer Engineering, Poetry, Music, Love, Life.
コンピュータ工学,詩、音楽、愛、命。
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i find myself with this most terrible weapon
and no idea as to where to point it.

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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello there and thank you for faving Poor Wooden Puppy.  It's much appreciated.  Have a good weekend!  :highfive:
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ourage Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for adding my poem to your collection! And you're an engineer? That's impressive! I could never make it; I'm way too dumb Giggle 
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91816119 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, my dear. :heart:
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SatoshiII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Long time no see, stranger.
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OHiNeedTea Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thanks for the fav :D
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91816119 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, honey. :heart:
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Republic2033 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
thanks for faving :happybounce: I really appreciate it !
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Akai-karasu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty late, but still: thanks for collecting 'values! :)
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for the :+fav:, and the incredibly helpful critique. :iconarmstrongtighthugplz:
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